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Concrete Keeps Falling

Concrete keeps falling on my head Imagine how painful that is wished I was dead With a little Vaseline And a can of kidney beans Rub gently and spend next two days in bed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/28/2020 8:58:00 PM
Make sure you have good medical coverage Jack lol...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/29/2020 6:52:00 AM
That's one thing we've got here in Canada! Yee Haw!!! Hope your day is going well Michael!!!
Date: 7/28/2020 8:10:00 AM
I hope this is fiction! Says the quite concussed <3
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/28/2020 8:34:00 AM
Nope! The truth and nuttin but the truth! Love my love! Didn't hit my head so I'm still able to write my hilarious lims! Love from a doped-up friend! XOX
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/28/2020 8:33:00 AM
Nope! The truth and nuttin but the truth! Love my love! Didn't hit my head so I'm still able to write my hilarious lims! Love from a doped-up friend! XOX
Date: 7/28/2020 7:44:00 AM
You should really invest in a high vis jacket and hard hat. Good day Sir Jack Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/28/2020 8:28:00 AM
Great idea Thomas!!! LOL

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