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Concertina: Sonnet For Yom Hashoah

Tonight, I miss God, though I doubt he IS; All sense of Providence stripped away Like my wife’s gray smock last time I saw her Walking naked and welted to showers From whence the sole cleansing is soul release From this chamber of horrors which now is Our life. Dirty Jood they now call me, Spitting, and striking my dignity down. The world around me seems strange viewed through Coiled concertina razor wire, Cut-off, as it were, from all engagement With beauty, birds, billowing clouds, blessings. O God, departed One, return delight’s Remembrance in Redemption, if You care! © 2016 David W. Palmer

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Date: 5/7/2016 10:54:00 AM
david, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/7/2016 2:13:00 AM
David, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/5/2016 11:38:00 PM
David, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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David Palmer
Date: 5/5/2016 11:43:00 PM
Dear SKAT A -- thank you so much for your kind welcome message. I do look forward to interacting with many. Live in Renton WA

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