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unrhymed tercets

You are where the sunset's join glowing wonder Holding a breathless twilight zone forever beauty golden sands combed through waves salt misted cry Oceans rise and fall beckoning currents turn tides around echoes chant of delight crashing land's a whispered prayer seduced by the spectre that your light warmly embraced Transfixed under a rare rapture beholding peace spellbinding jewels captivated within treasure's hidden you whom holds the power and destiny possessing royal blue

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Donna Loughman

Date: 12/29/2017 5:08:00 PM

Liam, “golden sands combed through waves salt misted cry” my favorite line..stirring lyrical poem! Happy New Year to you and your family :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2017 3:07:00 PM

- A beautiful poem, dear friend Liam - Best wishes for a peaceful and lovely new year - Take care of all those close and dear - Hope good friendship will exist, even for the coming years - (I received a letter from you today .. . thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/29/2017 12:03:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^