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Complementary Lines

Your words cave in to my ear canal, each laud casting lines slight of fate. I live this life as a fish woman, with my tackle box full of bait.

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Date: 2/26/2024 4:02:00 PM
Dear Kate, Your poem is so intriguing! The imagery is captivating and it creates a unique and mysterious sense of connection and hidden meanings. The "lauds casting lines" and the "slight of fate" hint at a deeper understanding beyond the surface, where words can have a profound impact and even manipulate our perception. The fish woman with her tackle box adds another layer of intrigue, suggesting a hidden skill or awareness in navigating the depths of communication. I'm left wanting to explore further and understand the full story behind these complementary lines. Such a thought-provoking piece!- Blessings, Daniel
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