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The time is finally here 'Haterz' have no fear For I have come in peace to compete And to attain my rightful position and seat You see when I battle people,it's just unfair I hold **** down and y'all are unaware I stay true to my word,as long as I said it ooh, then I mean it I bring wreck like little Denice the menice But do not be fooled,i'm complex like the city of venice You all be rapping this and that,**** be fabricated Bring your garbage round me,get you all annihilated I'm chemically unchanged,no one here is a challenge Battling me is risky,observe the talent My lyrics untouched,flow is hot,with a twisted plot I got ice in my veins,so keep a close watch Don't mess with me,'cause i'll clap the steel I might just be the type of dude you all need to kill But Revenge is a dish served cold So I wear coats and stay in murk mode And For people thinking they got potential Tell them to wait until I put a missile in their lines They should wait till I beat them lyrically off the porch step The only reason their rap is tight is 'cause they wear a corset My heart knows that I'm close to that seat Soul sings for joy,cause the sun is under my feet Sense organ smells victory I smile 'cause of the obvious sign of prosperity Hope you all see that I ain't got to exert much energy when facing enemies I'll probably haunt your dreams like Jason's enemies I'm very powerful with pen Mightier than the sword,it is written once again. Talk the talk and Walk the walk contest.Early 90's

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Jill Spagnola

Date: 6/20/2015 3:31:00 AM

Fierce!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2015 11:45:00 PM

AUSTIN, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Austin Eseke
Date: 6/19/2015 6:45:00 AM

thanks dear

Skat A

Date: 6/16/2015 9:46:00 PM

Austin,, Congratulations on the HM, not exactly what I was looking for. However, it was a joy to read all over again. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/10/2015 3:15:00 PM

Hi Austin, the workshop is closed but will not be finished for another week. This will give all the participants time to finish their revisions and to make sure to visit OTHER workshop participants to provide them with feedback, too. Once I have seen that revisions have been done, I will officially close the contest. All those who have revised their work and shown what was revised will remain on the honour roll ;) I'll come back later and see if anyone has provided additional feedback.

Skat A

Date: 6/9/2015 11:46:00 PM

sweet

Austin Eseke
Date: 6/12/2015 10:25:00 AM

Hmm,thanks dear

Judy Konos

Date: 6/5/2015 4:18:00 PM

"Battling me is risky,observe the talent"...;Yes I observed your talent. You entered this GEM in my Queen Elizabeth contest....Ya just can't get much more talented than that!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/15/2015 2:02:00 PM

I like the rhythm, the movement of this poem! Good rant. (Soup may delete it if they see the curse words, if someone should complain. Me? I won't complain, but it may happen) So, for me, I think this poem would really benefit from some line breaks. Tighter, leaner, rat-a-tat-tat. By breaking the lines differently, you can play with the words, startle the reader.//=line break. Example, "I have come in peace//to compete and to obtain//my rightful position and seat.//

Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 5/15/2015 2:04:00 PM

the rhyme is still there, but now is not at the end of the line. Free verse rarely contains this much end line rhyming. I really do like the in your face attitude. I loved reading this. I hope the others drop by soon.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 11:01:00 PM

you are so welcome... ((regarding the bottom reply))