Compassion Abounds

Compassion does abound in this modern world we live
Where animal and man return ones love to give
An element we all do fear could have taken all their lives
But this was not the day, that fate could contrive

To enter a burning building where their lives take second best
Training and their bravery, a heroes form of zest
Within these darkened realms, aflame and spewing of smoke
Any life that's spared, we deprive the smoking choke

For outside this smouldering building lies a bundle of stirring rags
Blackened canine features, their lives in deadening flag
Whilst alone on the sidewalk a hero sits in thought
Despair hits his heart in helpless strained distraught

His head in his hands now lifted, stirred by whining sounds
Towards him walks the mother, he turns in total astound
Leaning down to pet her, compassion fills his eyes
She licks his face to thank him, all saved and so alive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 4:37 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Joyce's contest James. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Congratulations on your win James. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.
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February 4, 2011 at 1:30 PM
Hi James - Congratulations on your win in Joyce's contest. Best wishes, Kory"
Richards Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Another wonderful story from you, James!! Congratulations! love, Carrie
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February 4, 2011 at 12:19 PM
Congrats James on your well deserved win in the contest !Enjoyed your poem--kashinath
George   Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 9:35 AM
Wonderful writing, James. Many congrats on your BIG WIN! Lainie
Devonshire Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 9:34 AM
I'm so glad to see your poem in the winners' circle, James. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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February 4, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Congrats James on your winning poem in Joyce's contest with this extraordinary entry luv.. enjoy another top ten victory ...
Freeman Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 7:20 AM
James, good to see you in the top 10. Agape, Moses
Mannan Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 7:12 AM
This is awesome.Tons of congratulations for this victory
Onclaud Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 1:07 AM
deeply endearing, james... my happy CHEERS for you for the win!! :) huggs, nette
Haick Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 10:47 PM
Congratulations on you wonderful 7th place win as I expected, Highlander! Love, Annalise
Johnson Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 10:12 PM
Great job, James. I so enjoyed reading all of these emotional poems. Glad to see your name here. Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 5:31 PM
Firefighters are amazing...their bravery, compassion, just out of this world. If this is for Joyce's contest, it will do well as it has captured the theme so well, James. Love, Annalise
Tate Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 1:01 PM
We all like to read about heros, and you have given us another to see. Good job. Thanks for reviewing mine as well.
Neels Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 5:18 AM
It is like you took that picture of JJ and made it your own with your words James.. All the best with this gem for JJ's contest ;)
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Terrific entry, James. I love the way you have the fireman sitting in thought and filled with despair until the mother dog walks over to him and licks his face. Very touching! Wishing you success in Joyce's contest. The entries are just flying in and she's already saying it will be hard to judge them. Now that you've helped judge a contest, you can understand what she means. Love, Carolyn
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