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Poetry/Terza Rima/Compartmentalization
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1563-867-23
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, July 23, 2023
For the International contest, This or That, Vol. 19
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 08/04/2023

Second Place

"Compartmentalize your life around your dreams, hobbies, goals even your grief and hurt and you will grow as a person." Quote _by Constance I like things in my life in compartments, good at dividing and separating; like a store with different departments. A time to pen poems captivating, and divide all my emotions inside; even put to the side things frustrating. I put my grief in a box that I hide, my past memories in a chest to keep; oh yes, I like to ascribe and divide. I go to the cemetery to weep, for all those I loved now gone up above; but try to not let them into dreams creep. There is a time for seeking a truelove, assign, label, seclude, group, draw apart; and a time for finding my own self-love. Each day has a specific time for art, and a time to pray and to talk with God; my beliefs are mine and part of my heart. my friend Buddha helps me 'cause I am flawed, I survive by having things in their place; for in my past from deep pits I have clawed, Each day I live in harmony and grace, my way may not be yours but it is mine; happiness is when each thing has a space.

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Date: 8/6/2023 9:58:00 AM
Wonderfully composed piece, Constance:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2023 9:47:00 AM
Edward, thank you so much for the contest, and my placement, and the compliment and congratulations, blessings !
Date: 8/6/2023 8:29:00 AM
"my beliefs are mine and part of my heart" - Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/7/2023 9:48:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, I love that line too, blessings !
Date: 8/5/2023 4:48:00 PM
Orignal idea so clever, and a chest filled with significance truly a wonderful Terza Rima. Congratulations on your win, Constance! xhugs ~ I Am Anaya
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Constance La France
Date: 8/5/2023 4:51:00 PM
Anaya, thank you so much for the compliment ad congratulations, hugs and blessings !
Date: 8/4/2023 8:31:00 AM
Yes, life is like a store with different departments, I also like 'Buddha helps me cause I'm flawed' - congratulations on your win~
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2023 2:40:00 PM
Michelle, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, blessings !
Date: 7/30/2023 2:08:00 AM
You have approached the topic in a different way quite unique ! You have set apart a space for each thing. It is so commendable. I love your concluding lines...."my way may not be yours but it is mine; happiness is when each thing has a space." Great thinking, dear Constance. All the Best.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2023 4:07:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and encouragement !
Date: 7/26/2023 10:02:00 AM
I used this title but this explains it better. My piece was compleatly off base. But I like the word and still think it fits. I like the way you expressed Your compatmentalization and I thought about it; I could have done this. Oh well...
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Constance La France
Date: 7/27/2023 2:16:00 PM
TS, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and the comment, is it too late to change your poem in the contest !

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