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Compartmentalization - First Place Contest Winner

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Compartmentalization, a labyrinth of the mind, Dissociation, a dance with fragments blind, Fragmentation, where sanity threads unwind, Within this mental content, secrets we find  In the depths of the psyche, a world untold Dissociative identities, stories unfold, The heart weighs heavy with stitches torn, Tender scars hemorrhaged; love core is worn. Dangling damage, as shattered glass, gleams Reflecting on the chaos, the pain, and the screams, The cerebral cortex fires, a bull eye strike fatally, Instinct walks the line, logic is useless, and hastily Shattered visions, a maze within the soul, Where reality ends and illusions control, Lost in the labyrinth, searching for the light, Betrayed by the mind deceptive might. Within this maze of mental content The battle to reconnect and prevent Childhood trauma, the catalyst of this plight, A shattered sense of self-taking flight. Each compartment holds a piece of the truth. Yet the puzzle remains incomplete, uncouth, A jigsaw of memories, scattered and torn, A puzzle of identities, tattered and worn. Fragments of memories are scattered and lost As the mind tries to bear the unbearable cost Memories encoded and stored deep within But retrieval becomes a battle to begin. Fragments of life scattered such debris, A shattered mirror, reflecting what used to be, The mind labyrinth, a maze of confusion, A battle within, a constant intrusion But amidst the chaos, a speck of hope A chance to mend the pieces, to learn to cope, To embrace the fractures and find strength within, To embrace the scars and let the healing begin. Within broken visions, a spark of resilience resides. A spirit that refuses to accept any abides. By compartmentalization and dissociation, by fragmentation and mental isolation. The cerebral cortex may fire, but the mind will rise. And rationality, once blasted, will find its prize. Instinct will gracefully dance with grace. As the shattered visions find their rightful place. So let us navigate this maze of the mind. With compassion and understanding, we'll find Behind the shattered glass and fractured dreams, Lies a resilience that utterly gleams.

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Date: 8/6/2023 8:51:00 AM
Absolutely stunning write, Lasaad:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 8/6/2023 8:05:00 AM
"Within broken visions, a spark of resilience resides. A spirit that refuses to accept any abides" - A very depictive writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/5/2023 11:23:00 AM
The process of mentally setting aside one’s incompatible or negative emotions, beliefs, or behaviors are expressed with eloquence, heart and soul. Congratulations on your top win, Sotto Poet! Superior message in the last stanza. Enjoyed~xAnaya
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Date: 8/4/2023 3:11:00 PM
this is so well done, congrats on your 1st place win Sotto :)
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Date: 8/4/2023 8:27:00 AM
Yes, putting together the different pieces to form a cohesive picture is the challenge, congratulations on your win~
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Date: 7/26/2023 3:53:00 AM
The mind and oor brain we seem to take for granted but that and the heart are so very essential to the upkeep of staying alive . Memories you compartmentalized somehow begin tio fade. So sad play scrabble at least once a week preferaby twice. Hugs And blessings Jennifer
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Date: 7/24/2023 4:49:00 PM
How wonderfully clever you are Lasaad!! An amazing poem you have written with the perfect picture! Debx
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Date: 7/24/2023 9:05:00 AM
Supreme. You captured the entire essence of compartmentalization. Every aspect of the reasons behind it, and described the thought process for separation and indeed showing the struggle between heart and mind.. This is an amazing artful poetic work capturing a difficult subject serving it to the reader on a golden platter. Well done. You are a master of words my dear Lassard.
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