L Milton Hankins Poet Rhyme

Coming To Papa

She comes to me with tear-stained eyes
Snuggles close and gently sighs,
“He said to me,” she whispered low,
“I do not love you. I must go.”

I put my arms around her,
I held her tight.

I told her he was probably not her kind
A finer young man soon she would find
“Another time, another place,” she agreed,
I knew her heart was breaking, indeed.

I put my arms around her,
I held her tight.

It was like when she was a little squirt
Coming to papa when her heart was hurt,
The joy of my life is being there for her
My eyes welled up, my words were a blur.

I put my arms around her,
I held her tight.

FIRST PLACE WINNER
written July 17, 2021
edited slightly July 18, 2021
especially for "I See Love" Poetry Contest
sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Reason A. Poteet July 26, 2021 at 6:22 PM Congratulations, L.Milton, on a fine piece L Milton Hankins July 26, 2021 at 7:35 PM Thank you so much for your affirmation, Reason. I really appreciate it.

Reason A. Poteet July 26, 2021 at 6:22 PM Such a precious piece for dads and daughters who enjoy a close understanding relationship. I remember a comment my dad made to one of his granddaughters who had been through a nasty divorce and was dating a wonderful man, "You have finally found someone who loves you." L Milton Hankins July 26, 2021 at 7:36 PM Thank you, Reason.

Jan Allison July 25, 2021 at 11:09 AM aww such a touching poem, wish i had had this type of relationship with my own father:-( hugs Jan xx L Milton Hankins July 25, 2021 at 12:49 PM I think most of us do, Jan. Unfortunately, most of us didn't.

Sam Kauffman July 25, 2021 at 8:59 AM Congratulations Milt. What a beautiful picture you have painted of the loving protection of a father - our Father. Well done. L Milton Hankins July 25, 2021 at 10:19 AM Thank you so much, Sam, for your thoughtful comment.

Paula Goldsmith July 25, 2021 at 8:09 AM Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. I Love It. A great dad is a blessing from God. Have a blessed day............ L Milton Hankins July 25, 2021 at 10:20 AM Paula, thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful comment on my poem.

Carol Mitra July 24, 2021 at 11:59 PM Father daughter relationships are special....Congrats on your win Milton :) L Milton Hankins July 25, 2021 at 10:20 AM Thanks so much, Carol.

Bhawana Pant July 24, 2021 at 11:06 PM Wonderful poem. Congratulations !! L Milton Hankins July 25, 2021 at 10:21 AM Bhwana, thank you.

Mystic Rose Rose July 24, 2021 at 2:34 PM no greater love and comfort then that of a dad, congrats on your win Milton L Milton Hankins July 24, 2021 at 4:13 PM Thank you so much for the win, Mystic Rose Rose. I really enjoyed writing this poem for your contest.

Gershon Wolf July 18, 2021 at 8:32 PM This is sweeter than honey, Milt. A splendid write! Thanks for posting it. Happiness and Joy, Gershon L Milton Hankins July 18, 2021 at 9:25 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. I found it rather sweet myself.

Caren Krutsinger July 18, 2021 at 5:21 PM This is absolutely wonderful, a tribute to a father's love and a daughter's trust. L Milton Hankins July 18, 2021 at 5:43 PM Thanks, Caren. It's how I always wanted it to be between me and my daughter. It was never that way, though. It's a wonderful dream that skirts on how I'd like reality to be.

Regina Mcintosh July 17, 2021 at 3:32 PM So beautiful. I love it. God bless you kind friend. Love, Gina L Milton Hankins July 17, 2021 at 6:13 PM Thank you so much, Regina.

David Mchattie July 17, 2021 at 1:08 PM As they say... being young is a million dollar experience I wouldn't pay a nickle to repeat. A young person's landscape is a minefield. I'm not sure how we all survived? But time heals all. Well penned. Have a great day my friend. L Milton Hankins July 17, 2021 at 1:19 PM Thanks, David. I really appreciate your read and your comment. Have a fantastic weekend!