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This is not fiction.  My Dad has been very ill and it's been a difficult time for me. My emotions have been raw and writing this has been a way for me to cope.

As I sit and wait for news, my anxiety's high Lost in thoughts and prayer and asking god why You have endured so much and now this You deserve a break, some peace and bliss I listen to the noises and sounds that surround Smells of antiseptic and sights of hospital gowns I hear voices and laughter and painful moans As I sit and pray we’ll be taking you back home I plead with God to spare you one more time Hear the clock ticking as I wait for a sign Your surgery has been for hours, it’s almost seven Wondering if you are coming home or going to heaven Just heard the news, you made it through and will be fine Relieved, I think my prayers worked or something else divine So thankful and grateful you’re still here and able to go home I love and still need you Dad, even though I am now all grown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/18/2021 12:59:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem... I think we all have been there one time or another. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/19/2021 4:17:00 AM
Thank you Virginia!
Date: 9/24/2018 12:05:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Tania, with this well penned poem from the heart.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/24/2018 5:55:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 9/21/2018 5:05:00 PM
aww Tania it must have been such a terrible time for you with your father so ill and it sounds like your prayers have now been answered. Hope your dad makes a full recovery and you can be relieved from the stress you've been under:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/21/2018 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Jan for your kind words!

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