Coming Home

The full moon glistens on the fallen snow;
He still has a couple of miles left to go,
As he walks on home from the bus depot;
Of his visit there nobody yet knows.

His deployment in Iraq has come to an end;
The Purple Heart hangs on his chest;
Of his shortened tour he told no family or friends;
His left sleeve is pinned to his vest.

The Greyhound bus that dropped him off,
Passes him rolling down the road;
The shrapnel he carries in a chewing tobacco tin,
As he marches along in the dark and the cold.

The long driveway to the house he grew up in,
Has not been shoveled of the snow;
The lights are still on, as everyone within,
Prepares for a midnight mass to go.

They are startled by noises out on the porch,
And wonder at the knock on the door;
They all rush in to see who it is,
As he drops his duffel bag upon the floor.

A one-armed hug isn’t so bad,
On the Eve before a Christmas Day;
When received by a hero son
Who’s been missed ever since he went away.

They all went to church with tears in their eyes;
One family of thousands of more;
Overjoyed by a wonderful Christmas surprise -
A soldier coming home from the war.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/15/2012 11:20:00 PM
Joe... Congratulations in Gail's Christmas In July!! Christmas Magic ... take care~ XOX *PD
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Date: 8/15/2012 8:18:00 PM
Congrats on your fantastic win, Joe! A deeply touching write!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/15/2012 9:26:00 AM
congrats Joe on your amazing poem on Christmas and a big win too.. thankxx for your very kind words to me.. I am on slow recovery time table .. my neck is healing well but my hands still giving me problems luv.. always something as u know.. take care ..luv..
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Date: 8/15/2012 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Christmas In July" contest Joe.
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Date: 8/15/2012 2:50:00 AM
Joe, congrats on your win, excellent write..David
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Date: 8/14/2012 7:59:00 PM
Wow I can just imagine how everyone would feel with the arrival of this soldier. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/14/2012 6:34:00 PM
A wonderful story. There were some happy hearts that Christmas Eve. But it is also filled with sadness. Glad you are back with us and thank you for your very kind words about my poetry. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/14/2012 4:23:00 PM
Such a touching portrait - congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:40:00 AM
A touching poem for so many of us. Thank you for posting it. A wonderful read. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/24/2010 7:53:00 PM
Well these words strike a cord with me Joe as u know my youngest son is serving in Iraq now.. not home for holidays ..maybe Christmas one week for his wedding if his orders come through.. very deep and tender thoughts in your lines ..very emotional from family point of view.. very stirring and an excellent piece luv.. enjoyed ..
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:28:00 PM
how many times has this sad story been told.
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:11:00 PM
Wow, again you make me cry, and I will say it again, Joe, you have a gift for storytelling, I think you could write a book, anyways, this poem is amazing, as usual .... Love Constance
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:20:00 PM
This poem feels like a warm hug, filled with tears and happiness rolled into one. A very touching tribute to this holiday, and to those men, women and families who make such sacrifice, so that we can sit around a Thanksgiving table and feel safe. Happy Thanksgiving, Joe!
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Date: 11/24/2010 12:53:00 PM
They must have been so proud to welcome home this hero, Joe. I wish every soldier stationed in the Middle East could be with their family this Christmas. The story behind this great poem is very touching. Have a happy Thanksgiving. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 11/24/2010 12:34:00 PM
Awesome holiday offering, Joe. Let me see one more now!
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Date: 11/24/2010 11:48:00 AM
It was so heartbreaking to read that "His left sleeve was pinned to his vest." His family would have been happy to see him whether he could hug them with two arms or one. My big brother surprised us by returning from Vietnam and appearing at the church for my sister's wedding. Seeing him alive and well made the occasion very special! A very moving poem, Joe. Thanks for sharing this with us. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:38:00 AM
this gives me much to reflect on.. may your shining art piece carry more peace to those who are in the fields.. well done, joe! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/23/2010 10:21:00 PM
that was an emotionally charged poem, fantastic
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