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Can you give us another try? I miss you. Only you can soothe my aching heart. My mind is searching for peace; I'm so blue, I long to see your face; let's make a new start. Nothing felt like home until you; you're my center. Give me the chance to win your heart again. Baby, you're so kind; you were a good mentor, Always so positive, you uplift and don't drain. Can you imagine our happy ending, my love? Keep the front porch light on; I'm almost there. Honey, we fit together like hand and glove, October would've been two years; you're my air. My fear caused me to run; absence is not fun, Each second apart hurts, because you're the one. Contest: Coming Back Home Sponsor: John Hamilton 03/01/2021 Third Place Winner

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Date: 3/8/2021 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Love your line, "Each second apart hurts, because you're the one." Sometimes the one is not really the one. Have a blessed day/week.....................
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Date: 3/8/2021 8:31:00 AM
Alexis, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/7/2021 12:08:00 PM
So well done Lexi, enjoyed the emotion in this write, congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 3/7/2021 12:38:00 PM
Hi John, You a great contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis
Date: 3/2/2021 10:35:00 AM
Coming home, where the heart belongs....so heartfelt, Alexis! A beautiful emotional poem, my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 3/2/2021 5:37:00 AM
Come back home, dear friend. Love to you always. And God bless you always ... Gina
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Date: 3/2/2021 4:49:00 AM
I like the honesty and feelings so well expressed in this poem. Good job, Bryan
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Date: 3/1/2021 10:56:00 PM
A heartfelt plea for reconciliation. Very well done.
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