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Coming Back Home

Cold winds blow outside so very strong Only to whisper you’re not where you belong. Motionless sitting morose by the fireplace Insipid frozen heart in the glow I gently place Not knowing when it will again throb and melt Getting the warmth of your touch long unfelt. Beyond the blue hills at dusk you’re gone Alone I wait for the rising sunburst dawn Charmed by flowers of my garden you’ll return Knowing you’re mine for your love I yearn. How much intensely I’m missing you now Once you’re with me I’ll convey somehow. Miles afar in the wilderness don’t any longer roam Enthused by pining heart, say you’re coming home. February 24, 2021 Contest : Coming Back Home Sponsor : John Hamilton For Brian Strand's Contest A Brian Strand July 3

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Date: 7/4/2021 12:27:00 PM
what a super acrostic Subimal the ending is so uplifting, Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/8/2021 8:24:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/7/2021 12:50:00 PM
Hi Subimal, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/7/2021 11:44:00 AM
Congrats Subimal on another win!
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