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Calloused by the do-or-die hero's walk on the perilous road
Over hazard's hill stumbling in soldier's shoes of regret and sorrow 
Merciless these wars of tired tyrants, this trailhead I have followed
I should bury these warrior's relics and take a train to tomorrow
Never looking back at my haggard patriot's duty, so torn apart
Go steady, stay strong with freed courage, as my heart's grief

Beats with the journeyed promise of going home unwary to relive
All of my memories there flooding to sing its lost and loving song
Catching 'God Speed' for my soul's simple sanctuary
Knowing these backroads lead to that certainty where I belong

Home
Over hazard's hill of regret and sorrow it waits in restful arbors
Marigolds and carnations embroider a calm and placid peace
Evermore scented in deep-rooted winds leading to my safe harbor


February 16, 2021

Coming Back Home Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/8/2021 8:27:00 AM
Lonna, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/12/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thanks very much Constance. I wish you health and happiness.
Date: 3/7/2021 1:01:00 PM
Hi Lonna, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:26:00 PM
Thank you so very much Alexis! Lonna
Date: 3/7/2021 11:57:00 AM
Another great write Lonna, you seem to know the kind of writing I enjoy, congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:26:00 PM
Thank you very much John. Love your contests as well! Hope you are well and happy! Lonna
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