Get Your Premium Membership

Coming Back Home

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Lonna Blodgett.


Calloused by the do-or-die hero's walk on the perilous road Over hazard's hill stumbling in soldier's shoes of regret and sorrow Merciless these wars of tired tyrants, this trailhead I have followed I should bury these warrior's relics and take a train to tomorrow Never looking back at my haggard patriot's duty, so torn apart Go steady, stay strong with freed courage, as my heart's grief Beats with the journeyed promise of going home unwary to relive All of my memories there flooding to sing its lost and loving song Catching 'God Speed' for my soul's simple sanctuary Knowing these backroads lead to that certainty where I belong Home Over hazard's hill of regret and sorrow it waits in restful arbors Marigolds and carnations embroider a calm and placid peace Evermore scented in deep-rooted winds leading to my safe harbor February 16, 2021 Coming Back Home Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/8/2021 8:27:00 AM
Lonna, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
Login to Reply
Blodgett Avatar
Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/12/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thanks very much Constance. I wish you health and happiness.
Date: 3/7/2021 1:01:00 PM
Hi Lonna, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Blodgett Avatar
Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/12/2021 3:26:00 PM
Thank you so very much Alexis! Lonna
Date: 3/7/2021 11:57:00 AM
Another great write Lonna, you seem to know the kind of writing I enjoy, congrats on a nice win!
Login to Reply
Blodgett Avatar
Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/12/2021 3:26:00 PM
Thank you very much John. Love your contests as well! Hope you are well and happy! Lonna

Book: Reflection on the Important Things