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Comforts

COMFORTS so smart looks the stereo set on the polished marble top, vase filled with ashen white lilies so slender they could be the stems of death. Fridges crammed with bleak ice as food seems to say 'things will always be this way' but ice petals know this can never be. Along slippery tiles echo the moans- all comforts are lies as they hide slimy deceit which clings to visual walls that tear down to move comforts lull and blind blizzards black wings drink blood © Kim van Breda—June 2014

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Date: 6/23/2014 4:19:00 PM
Dang Girl, Tis Some Creepy Crap Going On Huh: Peek-A-Boo....KLove *
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