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Comer's Stand

Seems we walked away the morning Hil and I hiking toward Comer's Stand Stopping awhile to swing on a grapevine Identifying the wooded birds singing We ate our lunch in early afternoon- A peanut butter and jelly concoction With raisins from Grandma's cupboard And stocks of celery purloined, I think, From the crisper of Mama's Frigidaire All tied together in a hobo's feed sack High adventure the trek to Comer's stand. Worth the fate awaiting our return For no corn was hoed, no garden weeded Even though Papa had said, "Today, my boy! " There would be neither excuse nor reason Why I should not feel the crack of the strop But the pain did not erase the grand Time we had …hiking to Comer's Stand.

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Date: 12/10/2020 8:27:00 AM
Childhood days are always memorable.
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Date: 12/8/2020 8:53:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this, making me nostalgic of my childhood days. Thanks likewise for my placement in your previously judged contest. God bless you.
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Date: 12/7/2020 9:52:00 PM
Love the story, great example.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/8/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 12/6/2020 7:58:00 AM
Brings to mind the feel of “Stand By Me” one of my favourite movies. Thanks for directing me to your two wonderful writes.
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Date: 11/9/2020 5:43:00 AM
Hi LMilton, Thank you for your nice comment on my piece "The River". I would love to submit to your 2021 Visionary contest! "Comer's Stand" truly evokes the feeling of the narrator's glee in embracing Nature as they hike to Comer's Stand. It reminds one of an old-fashioned tale in which the character is so excited about something that delights him, that the initial objective is not attained. Unless you recognize the character's goal of taking joy in the nature hike as his objective! Thank you!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/10/2020 1:12:00 PM
True story, Jennifer. Thanks so much for your kind words. i spend a lot of time thinking about "those good ol' days" which really weren't so good.... Well, there are some grand memories, and I like to share them. Thanks! Thanks!
Date: 11/8/2020 2:25:00 PM
Great story, one of many I should think, fondly recalling your youth. Enjoyed! - Bob H
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/10/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thanks, Bob. Hil was a victim of polio, so we hobbled along. He was my friend, my mentor, and even today he remains my longest, bestest friend! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. If you enjoy this type of writing, take a look at "Mama's Kodak." Thanks!
Date: 11/8/2020 9:46:00 AM
That's quite a childhood..
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/8/2020 12:52:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One. It was an interesting childhood, to say the least. I appreciated your comment.

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