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Comemplating Lunch

As lunch draws near, My taste buds rise. Will it bring a tear? Or make my senses rise? Such in my great joy. Fish in sauce is great. Or bok-choy with soy? A dream on my plate. Ah,here it comes! Hot dog on a bun I can taste it, past my gums. Would there were more than one!              Quatrain         Monosyllables) 2/26/2021 ~2~              Monosyllables were used in Robert Frost's "Stopping by the Woods on a Snowy Evening."

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Date: 2/28/2021 4:05:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, there should be more than one. One hot dog is not enough. Hugs Darlene xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/1/2021 6:02:00 PM
Good grief. The comment went away. Not rewriting it mot here times h Pangie XXOO
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/1/2021 11:54:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I do not like skinny hot dogs either. I like the fat ones better. Hugs Darlene xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/1/2021 10:27:00 AM
Dome hot dogs are more filling and better than others here in the USA. I loathe skimpy hot dogs. Then you do need two. Lol Hugs. Pangie xxx
Date: 2/27/2021 3:54:00 AM
Love hotdogs too. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/1/2021 10:24:00 AM
Hot dogs and yummy condiments..mmmm Merci Pangie xx
Date: 2/27/2021 2:08:00 AM
Question, did you have fries with it lol. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/1/2021 10:22:00 AM
No fries....LOL Pangie

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