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Come To Paradise

absolutley beautiful striking a spark when one soul shines out radiating warmth in the deepest of feelings touching without lips seeing in sight uttering under the breath blowing upon emotions softly it lands touching to the very heart one beauty is your soul fluttering into the deepest ocean washing away all darkness holing the eyes of inner vision a golden treasure on the ground that you stand i place all feelings on a woolen fleece you softly stand tall among'st them held in the castle that of souls if we come together will be the making that in one beauty i found paradise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/9/2013 1:04:00 AM
beautiful and fantastical.
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:45:00 PM
WOW THIS IS VERY DEEP AND BEAUTIFULLY DONE LOVED IT. AND THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT ON MY HEARTS OCEAN WRITE.
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Date: 10/8/2013 7:52:00 PM
wow, liam, i sure love the feeling, and imagery of finding paradise within another heart. beautiful........... SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2013 3:13:00 PM
An absolutely beautiful poem. The images conjured up are gorgeous. Best Wishes, Linda
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Date: 10/8/2013 11:53:00 AM
Hi Liam, Wonderful romantic pen buddy.. Ken
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Date: 10/8/2013 11:35:00 AM
Beautiful, I am sure she will gladly except your invitation Liam.
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