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Come No Closer

Do not come so quick, oh Death! I am aware of my bouts of mortality I am dressed in the garments of reality Come no closer, Strumming your instruments We have inhaled your essence We have known our fate for centuries There is no one like you, Too close yet so far— Growing in the pits of our bodies Festering our hopes and fears Destroying our flesh, But sparing our spirits However will I fly, When I die? For I am no free bird, Yet I’ve pecked my way to the clouds I’ve reached the point of no return Without the burn of your strum, Without the burn! I am no god, I can condemn only my broken heart I can only create what lives from my body Apart Come no closer, you buzzard! I fly not under or above your wing You’ve no place in my symphony Strumming away your dissonant chords I’ve once called you kind Till you have stolen me blind I am no bird, Nor god, But a hopeless, human heathen A beast perhaps for life, Though truth and tears still thrive

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Date: 9/4/2017 9:54:00 AM
Laura, the tone of your poem feels deeper than your words convey. A heartfelt piece you have written, intense and full of emotion.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/6/2017 3:05:00 PM
Thanks James, for the kind comment. Death comes ever near, and it's hard to quiet the thought of it. <3~Laura
Date: 9/3/2017 6:43:00 PM
For a heart that beats for more beauty and battles, Death's pomp and promise becomes quite ridiculous Poetess...reading your poems tonight has put poetry on my lips...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/6/2017 3:03:00 PM
It is so easy to become so absorbed in our sense of mortality, Justin. Thanks for the sweet comment. <3~Laura
Date: 9/3/2017 3:31:00 AM
Hi Laura , wow you are truly gifted such a beautiful flow and subject that haunts us all , the when , where, how and hope of continuation in some way ::))) hugs
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/6/2017 3:02:00 PM
Nial, thank you for your words. I appreciate the visit, and will be exploring more of your poetry real soon. <3~Laura

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