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Come Into My Dream

Come into my dream this very night my dear, let's stroll along the lake shore, as the glare from the moon reaches clear across the lake your sweet soft, velvet lips, touch mine, while holding you so tight, tears flow down your tender cheeks you know full well, dreams, are just dreams, not like the way we wished things were, soon it will be morning, then we must part to return to real world, without us together. wrote 8-13-08

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Date: 8/19/2008 8:53:00 PM
this is a really good poem about ones feeling and how dreams effected ones life i really injoyed it a wonderfull piece
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Date: 8/15/2008 1:28:00 PM
Seems you are reliving a heartbreak or having a beautiful dream you know you must wake up from. Either way, a wonderful, but sad and emotional write. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/15/2008 12:53:00 PM
Now you have done gone and broke my heart - I'm sorry James that you must feel this pain - I know it has to be just terrible - god bless
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