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Come In My Garden-H

Once saw you freshly bathed, with unstained glowing skin With hair like lakes that glint, fair beneath the stars Piercing grey-blue eyes, desiring heart a-cry The greenest of things blue, the bluest of things grey. You fuller pouty lower lip, allure to my upper lip Don’t need to get tips, as lips beautiful sink ships remembering your look, making me quite nervous Those leaning eyes, increasing my heart beats. Come in my garden, roses want to see you blossoming The recesses of my heart needs to feel throbbing Come, my mind wishes some intellectual touches Come in my dreams, I wish to confront life’s daydreams. ========================================== Dr. Ram mehta Honorable mention Contest: The Inside Rhyme sponsored by Deborah Guzzi

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Date: 5/21/2014 9:32:00 PM
Dr. Ram This is a very romantic, passionate, charming and love filled write. Thank you for the nice comment on my Life's Path poem.
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:15:00 AM
Congrats on the HM in the contest ...... George
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Date: 3/29/2011 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations Dr Ram on your worthy poem's honered success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/29/2011 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Rhyme Inside". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 10:13:00 AM
Don't know how I missed this one earlier, Dr. Ram, but really love the way you invite this beautiful woman into your garden so the roses can see HER blooming. She sounds so beautiful! Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:41:00 PM
Congrats on the winners' list, Dr. Ram. Yours was a very pretty poem.
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:28:00 PM
Dr Ram - Many Congrats on big win with this superb creative write. Luv & Best wishes-Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:59:00 PM
Oh such a heart warming rhyme. Warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:49:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your HM in Debbie's contest with this excellent entry and enjoyable write my friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:06:00 PM
Very yearning and romatic. Many congrats on your well deserved win, Dr. Ram. Elaine
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Date: 3/22/2011 9:09:00 PM
oh the mystical feeling of true love.... :)
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Date: 3/22/2011 2:11:00 PM
What a romantic tale!
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Date: 3/20/2011 8:45:00 AM
great imagery, Dr. Ram! Enjoyed the read this late Sunday afternoon!...All the best!...Gert
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Date: 3/19/2011 9:01:00 AM
Like the interplay between the colour definitions Dr Ram, also the allure you have so well projected here.
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Date: 3/19/2011 1:15:00 AM
Hey, very nice, reminds me of when we had those Adam and eve poems in the garden!! Most interesting when you said greenest of blue and bluest of grey. Reminds me of when I put my green contacts over my blue grey eyes or my bue contacts over them!! Was this for a contest?
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:26:00 PM
Lovely lines Dr. Ram.. imagery so vibrant my friend..especially your second verse.. my hubby is always teasing me about my pouty lips too.. good luck if for any contest my friend..
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