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All heaven's hosts rise early Autumn nights A million stars a-twinkling merrily The moon reflecting sun's diurnal light Silhouetting lovers, snuggling cozily My fireplace crackles, warming slippered toes A whistle from the kettle on the stove The doorbell rings; in cold like this, who goes Come in, dear friend, do not this cold night rove The stranger enters, shiv'ring head to toe His face pale blue above his knitted brow Removes his gloves; into his hands he blows He would yet tell his tale, but knows not how Exhausted steps, and then he stumbles, falls ~His story's buried deep within my walls (Iambic Pentameter)

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Date: 11/6/2019 8:23:00 PM
G'day Gershon … so well written sonnet with a fine topic. You must be pleased with this work Gershon - Lindsay
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:28:00 PM
Gosh, I'm sure pleased to read comments like yours, I must say, Lindsay! Thanks a million! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/6/2019 4:06:00 AM
A lovely and clever illustration of the sonnet form - a perfectly cozy scene given a cool twist that leaves us guessing. Well done, Gershon.
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:27:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful reflection on this sonnet, Geoffrey. Appreciated. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/6/2019 1:47:00 AM
This is a cozy tale, which includes the mysterious stranger, a must in any great story poem!
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:26:00 PM
Yes, that 'mysterious stranger' certainly does make the rounds. Nice perception! Thanks, Caren. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/5/2019 10:20:00 PM
Gershon, Very nice. Always welcoming a friend to come in from the cold. -Richard
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/5/2019 9:59:00 PM
So nice and beautiful too Gershon. I like stars twinkling merrily. Very kind :)
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:25:00 PM
And I like your lovely comments, Heidi, as they twinkle so merrily! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 11/5/2019 5:30:00 PM
Hi Gershon, I always love the sonnet form and you have done a wonderful job with the form and the tale you tell. Your words breathe out reality, I am glad I am in the warm with my heating on. Wonderful work. Have a wonderful Wednesday when it comes. Your friend....Mike.
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Date: 11/5/2019 8:43:00 PM
Very, very humbled by your kind words about this sonnet. Thank you so much, Mike! A wonderful Wednesday (and Thursday!) to you, my friend. Peace and Joy, Gershon
Date: 11/5/2019 3:51:00 PM
Very cool my friend. You did a fantastic job with this. Love the story but I am shivering now (Better turn the AC up) : ) I tried writing one of these today but couldn't get into the 10 syllable rhythm, but you did. Really nice.
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Date: 11/5/2019 3:58:00 PM
Ooh, thanks!! Your comment has warmed me up big-time. Much appreciated. ~ No longer shivering in Chicago (thanks to your kind words!)

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