Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

Come Hear My Song

I live to sing, is that strange?
Every night I go to the cabernet
And sing to my faithful friends.
I don’t earn much money
But I eat and drink a lot.

I love to tell them about me,
A blue-eyed girl with blonde hair.
I sing songs from other hits,
But I sing of myself too.
Now, ain’t that’s sweet?

 
Everyone looks at me, 
Everyone loves me.
I can sing high,
I can sing low
But I am getting bored now.
For I need more money.
Do you know any billionaires?
Go to YouTube!

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Eve Roper February 13, 2025 at 7:13 PM Another great story, I am not able to keep a note. Love the last line, “Go to YouTube” . Vienna does sing on YouTube. I enjoyed reading my friend.

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2025 at 3:02 PM Ha. It sure seems that way nowadays

Paige Hind February 8, 2025 at 6:00 PM Cute poem - keep singing

Tom Cunningham February 8, 2025 at 5:02 AM She needs a manager who can steer her on the path to stardom then watch the pennies roll in. Tom

Hiya Sharma February 8, 2025 at 12:21 AM Ah, this is quite a witty and creative write, dear Victor. You've described the situation of so many artists who deserve many more accolades and success! The struggle of following one's passion and getting a source of earning as a reward is actually real. You've so evocatively conveyed that here with brilliant wordplay! Sending you light and best wishes always. Hope you are doing well!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh February 7, 2025 at 10:01 PM Enjoyed reading the poem.So beautiful !

Valsa George February 7, 2025 at 9:47 PM If you enjoy singing and if everyone loves you, go ahead! Don't bother about money..... :) Dear Victor, you come up with interesting topics and with such variety of topics. Really enjoyed.

CayCay Godwin February 7, 2025 at 3:07 PM Such an unexpected ending, caught me completely off guard. Your cleverness is always apparent, but you got me with this satirical write. Hugs ... CayCay

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 7, 2025 at 10:38 AM Victor, I enjoyed this engaging story of a woman doing what she loves the most. Will she make it? Time will tell. Even the biggest stars start out small. :)

Joseph May February 7, 2025 at 10:19 AM Singing the hits, wanting more cash

John Read February 7, 2025 at 10:09 AM Hi Victor, I do know one billionaire his name is Musk,you can always give him a call lol.

Sara Kendrick February 7, 2025 at 7:16 AM There might be just the site on the internet for this girl, Victor. A site to introduce her to some free millionaires. Thanks for sharing and yes, some women are only looking for money and not for a good relationship. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 7, 2025 at 4:42 AM Hello Victor, A truly enjoyable read for your words sing with a raw, unfiltered honesty that is both refreshing and deeply felt. I thought that there’s a real charm in the simplicity, a desire beneath the playful tone. Your voice, both in song and in verse, carries a spirit that refuses to be ignored. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Michael Tor February 7, 2025 at 3:41 AM She had quite the ego, and looking for a billionaire, gold digger too? I read between the lines Victor on this one. Maybe I read too much my friend... Thank you for sharing. Hope all is well.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2025 at 2:12 AM - Yes, this was sweet, Victor :) - hugs

Ink Empress February 6, 2025 at 11:29 PM Dear victor, the ending made me smile but its the sad reality for many artists, singers and many more, so many talented souls but they find it challenging to make money out of their passion. Brilliant poem, well woven and delivered as always! Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always