Come away my love

Come away with me my love Come away with me my darling Come away with me to our new paradise Where our love would suffer no more Where envy and jealousy would be crucified To rise no more Come away with me to our new abode To our haven of peaceful bliss Where we would fret no more Where we would be safe To love and be loved in return To the chagrin of detractors Hell bent to destroy our immortal love Come away my love to a new beginning

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Augustine Ogoegbunam Eseke

Date: 11/22/2024 2:44:00 AM

Thank you Beata for your kind words about my poem. Remain blessed as we await the birth of our lord Jesus Christ at Christmas!

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/19/2024 5:10:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.