Come As You Please

Licensed you grabbed my rod capturing lightning in a bottle   igniting recluse in my fuse   feeling up my fortitude   with amber hues of bliss   some tongue, some teeth, a kiss   planted within my seed   I pull your hair with greed   each morsel do you plead   prodding in the rear   there's throbbing in the air   I whisper and sigh as you stroke   and invoke your power     with each choke of my need   flying fast and free in your breeze   on your knees,   I come as you please
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/6/2018 3:50:00 PM
In England we're experiencing a heat-wave at the moment...After reading this.Guess Flowing Lava is to follow Hehe.Daring and alluring to many I'm sure.
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Date: 7/6/2018 2:43:00 PM
Whew ~
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Date: 7/6/2018 3:01:00 AM
too hot to handle :D hope all is well with you Tim :D Smiles.. :)
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Date: 7/6/2018 1:02:00 AM
Tim, your muse is exploding all over the page. Your fine tuned pen that writes of romance effortlessly is just now showing off! Your stir the soul my friend and that is rare indeed!
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:20:00 PM
Oh my!! Your thoughts explode with love, romance, desire and passion. And- playfully so. Very exciting indeed. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:20:00 PM
- It has not been especially hot today ... rather little cold I must say .... but NOW it became incredibly hot, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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