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I can be found down a long winding road, Brush away the leaves and you will see my name; Oh yes, this poet from whose pen words flowed. In life, my poetry never had great fame, In death, I am a wispy ghost that haunts his days; Brush away the leaves and you will see- my name. Oh, on my grave, weeping, flowers he lays, He has searched the world for me with longing love; In death- I am a wispy ghost that haunts his days. Come, my whisper gentle as a mourning dove, You have travelled far, dear one, let me hold your hand; He has searched the world for me- with longing love. My poetry book, he found one day in a distant land, And he fell in love with this girl from another time; You have travelled far dear one, let me hold your hand. And then, a dagger to his heart and at last he is mine I can be found down a long winding road; And he fell in love with this girl from another time, Oh yes, this poet from whose pen words flowed _______________________________ March 12, 2016 Poetry/Terzanelle/Come, My Whisper Copyright Protected, ID 16-767-522-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Where Will They Find Me sponsor, Marugu Mo Third Place

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Date: 3/20/2016 9:19:00 PM
Revisiting to congratulate, Constance. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/21/2016 1:03:00 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting with the congrats and hugs !
Date: 3/20/2016 4:52:00 PM
A lovely Terzanelle, Broken Wings. Imagery, emotion, love, sadness...a heartfelt write. Congrats on your fine win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/21/2016 1:26:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful comment, the congrats, the 7 and the hugs !
Date: 3/20/2016 2:55:00 PM
Great write, Constance-- "And then, a dagger to his heart and at last he is mine"...that packed a punch, along with the rest of it. Great work my friend...congrats on your placement :)
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Date: 3/20/2016 4:38:00 PM
Sam, thanks for visiting with the nice comment and congrats, I like that line also, it just came to me as a good ending !
Date: 3/20/2016 2:25:00 PM
BW, a lovely write..many congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/20/2016 4:39:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the lovely and the congrats ~
Date: 3/13/2016 10:22:00 AM
the form is superb, and the wording is excellent, fun to read BW
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Date: 3/13/2016 5:00:00 PM
Sage, thank you for the compliment and the excellent !
Date: 3/12/2016 8:21:00 PM
wow, this is an amazing terzanelle, Constance. One of my favorite forms of poetry for wistful poetry such as this. You came up with a splendid idea for this contest. I want to do a good job for this one as well. But i have stiff competition with you already. he is only choosing a few winners and for now, you look like a shoe-in!
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Date: 3/13/2016 8:17:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the wow, I love this form as well, for this kind of poem, I am sure you will write a beauty, it is a stiff competition with only 3 placements, one never knows, but I know I love my poem created !
Date: 3/12/2016 7:28:00 PM
Love the write! The words of a poet will always flow! Wishing you the best in the contest!
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Date: 3/13/2016 8:42:00 AM
Robert, thanks for visiting with the love and the nice comment, so appreciated !
Date: 3/12/2016 5:00:00 PM
Oh I love this one Broken Wings! crystal clear 7 too!
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Date: 3/12/2016 5:04:00 PM
Arthur, oh thanks for visiting with the love and the crystal clear 7 !
Date: 3/12/2016 2:40:00 PM
So sadly well done. Well wishes for high places, Broken Wings...
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Date: 3/12/2016 4:43:00 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting my poem, I will need luck as the sponsor is selecting only three winners ~
Date: 3/12/2016 2:06:00 PM
- A heartbreaking and deep touching poem, dear B.W. - Deserves a crystal clear 7! - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 4:48:00 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for visiting and for the lovely comment and the crystal clear 7 and hugs :)
Date: 3/12/2016 2:01:00 PM
Though this is a new poetic form for me.....I see this...I see this...I see this! Your talent is beyond! :-)
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Date: 3/12/2016 4:57:00 PM
Walter, thank you for visiting and for the compliment, it is a great form, you should give it a whirl :-)
Date: 3/12/2016 1:05:00 PM
Constance, it is 70. For sure, you don't have wait that long... Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/12/2016 5:37:00 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting my poem and for the hugs !
Date: 3/12/2016 12:31:00 PM
One fine day, the world will witness your talents... You're immensely talented and I like the way you compose your work... It comes straight away from your hear... 7/7
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Date: 3/12/2016 6:14:00 PM
Red, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment and double 7's, so appreciated !
Date: 3/12/2016 11:51:00 AM
Nicely penned Constance, really enjoyed this very much, well done!
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:55:00 AM
Gordon thanks so much for visiting my poem and the compliment, appreciate ~
Date: 3/12/2016 10:34:00 AM
Exceptional piece! I so enjoyed it. 7 all the way.
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:33:00 AM
Richard, thanks for visiting with the exceptional and the 7, appreciate !
Date: 3/12/2016 10:05:00 AM
Love your whisper effect - it sounds the work mystically. Love, daver
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:37:00 AM
Dave, thanks for the compliment and the love !
Date: 3/12/2016 8:37:00 AM
What an outstanding take on this contest theme, very original!! Well done BW
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:39:00 AM
Brian, thanks for the compliment, appreciate !

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