Colours

Colours It’s almost March and Spring will come To brighten daisies in the sun, As tinted buds around my gate Will soon wear garlands, I await. As yellow pours down upon their bodies, Softly caressing every curve, To rise in sweet thrills of fantasies Then down the limbs , a golden swerve. When hues of morn begin to croon Their rhythm to cycle’s fortune Oh daisies in the sun, I’ll hear The lambent glow of Spring’s premiere! Colours Contest of Shadow Hamilton posted 2/8/2014

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S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/27/2014 6:41:00 AM

Congrats, Nette, All your poems are usually colorful. This one is no exception!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2014 8:53:00 PM

Congrats on another win with this one. It's as pretty as ever, Nette.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/26/2014 8:40:00 PM

lovely write on nature's sprinkle of colours. Nette, congrats for the win. Mohan

Joseph May

Date: 6/26/2014 8:25:00 PM

A lovely write Nette...congrats on your win

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/26/2014 5:59:00 PM

always a pleasure to read your work Nette this poem sparkles congrats on placing 4th and for your support hugs

Roger Horsch

Date: 3/6/2014 1:31:00 PM

Congrats Nette on a wonderfully written poem. I loved it......Hugs.....Roger

Betty Bateson

Date: 3/2/2014 7:44:00 AM

Beautiful poem. I love the sun so much and can hardly wait for Spring to bring it. Congrats on your awesome win...Betty

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/2/2014 3:36:00 AM

Enjoyed the write on the life-giver Sun. Congrats on the win, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2014 10:46:00 PM

Yellow inspires such beautiful poetry. This is a gem, Nette. Congrats!!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 3/1/2014 10:37:00 PM

Congrats on the win Nette . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/1/2014 7:53:00 PM

Very beautiful congratulations. Love, Joyce

Huberta Van Akkeren

Date: 3/1/2014 5:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Nette. A lovely read

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/1/2014 5:09:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, great job

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/12/2014 10:06:00 AM

Excellent beautiful picture adorned with amber color. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my friend, bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/8/2014 9:50:00 PM

This is another magnificent write by you, a masterful writer for sure! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem here this evening! I thoroughly liked the 2nd stanza, and the line, "In yellow tones...such rare delight." which is within that stanza! What a superior Spring enhanced piece! Great Work!!

Darren Watson

Date: 2/8/2014 2:42:00 PM

A sheer joy to read nette. Thanks for sharing . Spring for me arrives when my snowball trees are in full bloom . Heaven.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2014 2:18:00 PM

Ahh!! I found one Daffodil blossom today..It is still cold though but it is letting me know that spring is almost to arrive..Sara

Poet Tacito

Date: 2/8/2014 1:07:00 PM

The shade, the light. The true beauty in the darkness. Magnificent imagery! =D

Leon Datu

Date: 2/8/2014 11:29:00 AM

You have a wonderful touch with wording, Nette. Exploring the intrinsic beauty of a flower shows how tuned in you are to the world.

Tim Smith

Date: 2/8/2014 11:04:00 AM

This is so beautiful nette. I am now longing for the spring and tending to my garden....Hugs Tim

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/8/2014 10:43:00 AM

Great one as usual ; your poetic prowess is astonishing, reeling out qualities with the rise of sun everyday; you are great nette. Kudos.