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my red-faced neighbor wrestles with her umbrella voila! a takedown

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Roberthenry Poulin

Date: 8/19/2013 5:34:00 AM

This one, yes this one, AWESOME. you ARE GOOD. I enjoy reading your senryu. A beautiful imagery here, I can see your neighbor struggling in the rain with her umbrella in a stiff wind witht he thing folding up and the thing taking her to the ground as in a countdown 1-2-3. pined to the ground. You need a book. My son now is ready to bring out my book of poems: the last leaf decides. They are working on the cover now. If I goggle your name will you pop up? Robert Henry Poulin

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/19/2013 11:31:00 AM

stamped with A-1 approval... a stunning 'ku!..:) huggs

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/18/2013 10:03:00 AM

Well done Reason!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2013 12:25:00 AM

oh now this is GOOD!!!!