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Colour of My Heart

Colour of my Heart Look to the rainbow as it paints the sky Exquisite colors that are on display For the heart does not question how or why As the sun smiles to take away the grey For my eyes are blind to the palettes hue Rendering visions of life’s creation Masterful pigments in a dancing spew Filling my soul with calming elation The artist enthralls as the colors spread A mesmeric mosaic in the art Such as humanity whose tears have shed And hold a loving place within my heart For all the colors that make up the Earth An enchanting awake, time for rebirth. 10 SYLLABLES PER LINE Rhyme scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GG Dec.06.2018 Colour of my heart Sponsored by: John Hamilton N/A for contest

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Carole Duet

Date: 12/18/2018 6:02:00 PM

Such a beauty...this one is, ^WW^, and so deserving of POTD. I know it's belated but it's sincere: congratulations.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/14/2018 1:11:00 AM

I keep saying in comments "beautiful poetry" however is true, I read poems like this I simply love reading them!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/13/2018 6:49:00 PM

Enjoyed reading, ^WW^, you have a way of painting a beautiful poem.. Good luck in the contest..

John Hamilton

Date: 12/13/2018 2:02:00 PM

I see this won POTD, congrats. (see, what do I know)

John Hamilton

Date: 12/13/2018 2:01:00 PM

Wonderful sonnet WW, never recognized this one as your style, slipped by me this time but I'll see you next time in the winners circle (sorry).

Charles Messina

Date: 12/12/2018 7:10:00 AM

A treasured sonnet, WW. Beautiful sonnet dear friend. Congratulations on POTD...love, light & peace :) ~CM

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/12/2018 12:53:00 PM

Thank you kindly Charles...would not be the same without you bud...love & light...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/12/2018 4:48:00 AM

A very nice sonnet! Love the final lines! Congrats on POTD!

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/13/2018 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Kimmy...love & light...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/9/2018 11:58:00 PM

- A beautiful poem, W.W. - Congratulations on your p.ot.d. :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/11/2018 8:30:00 PM

Thank you so much, my dear Anne-Lise...your beautiful Sunshine smile is always welcome...love & light dear sister...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/9/2018 7:07:00 PM

The art of your heart is a mesmeric mosaic indeed, my wicked bro bro, a beautiful creation. Congratulations on your well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Sis is so proud of you! Love and colours, Illum..

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 7:28:00 PM

Bro bro very proud of his brilliant sis's as well...nice to be insane in the membrane with you lol...love & insanity, but mostly love...bro bro {*J*}

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/9/2018 6:42:00 PM

YAY! I was so happy to see this favorite honored with POTD WW. Congratulations!

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 7:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, my dear Connie...would not be the same without you, my wonderful friend...love & more love to you...^WW^...{*J*}~John

Maria Williams

Date: 12/9/2018 6:08:00 AM

What a wonderful poem WW, a change from your usual style, but all the same, exquisite as always. Nice to see you taking your place at the Helm. Congratulations on POTD, and the music is an excellent choice my friend....Maria hugs

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 3:56:00 PM

Thank you, dear Maria...hope, all is well in Aussie Land...and how is the baby?...happy endings my good friend...love & light...^WW^...{*J*}

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/9/2018 1:56:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 5:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Ravi, for the comment and visit...love & light...^WW^

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/8/2018 2:19:00 PM

The colors of your heart shine beautifully here, my dear friend. :) Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Love and Brightness. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 5:09:00 AM

Brandy, you bring out the colors in me... you're my type of gal...love & light...^WW^

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/8/2018 1:13:00 PM

Huge congratulations on your brilliantly colored and exquisitely composed gem receiving POTD honors my dear friend!

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 5:04:00 AM

Thank so kindly dear Robert...happy endings my friend...love & light...^WW^

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/8/2018 11:22:00 AM

Colors are one of God's great gifts! Your tribute to them is just lovely. Congratulations!

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 5:03:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sunlite...love & light...^WW^

Lin Lane

Date: 12/8/2018 7:47:00 AM

With a nod and a wink ;-)

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 5:02:00 AM

Does that mean you like me, you really really like me lol...I'd like to thank the Academy lol...love you Laney...^WW^

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/8/2018 7:23:00 AM

Back with congrats WW, on POTD..well deserved.

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 5:00:00 AM

Thanks again Vijay...love & light...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/8/2018 7:18:00 AM

Congratulations on this beautiful POTD WW :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 4:59:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Heidi...one of favorite ladies...love & light...^WW^

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/8/2018 7:14:00 AM

My favorite Winged Warrior...Congratulations my friend...An Angelic poem of a heart...Lovely write...

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 4:58:00 AM

Thank you, light Warrior Arturo...we need more like you...love & light...^WW^

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/8/2018 6:58:00 AM

Back to congratulate you for POTD honors, well done...

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 4:57:00 AM

Thanks again Charlie...love & light...^WW^

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/8/2018 6:58:00 AM

Wonderfully done! Beautiful piece WW, congratulations on POTD, xomo

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 4:57:00 AM

Thank you so kindly, Mo...your one of the best my friend...love your light...^WW^

Joseph May

Date: 12/8/2018 5:57:00 AM

Beautiful write WW..Congrats on POTD..

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 4:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Joseph...love & light...^WW^

Nick Trim

Date: 12/8/2018 5:54:00 AM

congrats on potd WW, good work

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 4:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Nick...love & light my friend...^WW^

John Gondolf

Date: 12/8/2018 5:46:00 AM

Beautifully penned sonnet, WW, congrats on POTD and best of luck in the contest. John

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 4:54:00 AM

Thank you kindly, my friend, John...love & light...^WW^

Jan Allison

Date: 12/8/2018 5:24:00 AM

Youve painted a glorious picture ^WW^ i find rainbows as uplifting as your wonderful words, many congrats on potd:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/9/2018 4:53:00 AM

Thank you so much, sweet Jan...love & light...^WW^