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The fierce coloured horses: a meme by my friend Mel Leach.

I am a rainbow Sliding down Sliding down Strange concoction Of Egyptian dark And unusual green Eyes I am an olive With a strong kernel Flesh with a bite I am a rainbow Multi coloured And not straight Not so manly But very strong Beneath this Rainbow Stands a pot of gold This rainbow Wants you to Earn it By accepting Its colors.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/17/2016 11:55:00 PM
I am in awe of your colours. Bright beautiful rainbow! Love this write!
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Darren White
Date: 11/18/2016 12:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Carol, You too earned a golden smile :)
Date: 11/14/2016 5:56:00 PM
This was vibrant with an enhanced prismatic glow at the ending. Nicely done Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 11/14/2016 10:58:00 PM
Thank you :) Golden smile for you too....
Date: 11/14/2016 5:51:00 PM
what a wonderful vivid description of you Darren -its like a bio poem:-) wear those rainbow ribbons with pride on your chair my friend - when I see a rainbow makes me smile ... it should make you proud of who you are:-) hugs jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 11/14/2016 10:57:00 PM
I am proud of who I am. Smile for you, Jan! :)
Date: 11/14/2016 1:18:00 PM
Your colours are shining through your pen Darren
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Darren White
Date: 11/14/2016 1:34:00 PM
Yes Tim! You earned a smile of gold too :)
Date: 11/14/2016 11:39:00 AM
you color my day... greeat stuff from you, darren..huggs
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Darren White
Date: 11/14/2016 12:28:00 PM
I love it that you like the colors, you earned a smile too :)
Date: 11/14/2016 10:20:00 AM
What a wonderful description, and so should anyone earn all someone has to offer, i like this closing, well done, warm regards, Laura.
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Darren White
Date: 11/14/2016 10:26:00 AM
You earned my smile of gold :)
Date: 11/14/2016 10:16:00 AM
Well done, Darren :)
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Darren White
Date: 11/14/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi :)

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