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COLORS IN THE SKY

"Two doves in white flying, feathers glow beneath the morning's rainbow colors" QUOTE BY CHARLES MESSINA Drizzles of rain were falling, against the sun, they were glittering. Then somewhere across the horizon, shades of colors were born. The morning sun was shining so bright filling the hearts with deep delight, and to the morning's adorn, two beating hearts were sworn. Then under the vibrant rainbow, two doves were flying, as white as snow, across the sky, they were soaring, with pristine souls shimmering. Then the two hearts that unleashed them sailed together to live their common dream, for the glow of the blissful morning gave them hope for a bright beginning. December 6, 2022 Colors In The Sky Poetry Contest (6th place) Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 12/12/2022 12:20:00 PM
Hello Roger Carvis, A beautiful poem about the sky. i enjoyed it. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2022 4:01:00 AM
YOu are very welcome. Merry Christmas. Hugs / Darlene
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Roger Carvis
Date: 12/12/2022 5:01:00 PM
Thank you very much...
Date: 12/8/2022 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Roger Carvis
Date: 12/8/2022 8:13:00 PM
Thank you very much... Learning in progress
Date: 12/8/2022 9:31:00 AM
"shades of color were born" - such a lovely sight! Congratulations on your win Roger! :)
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Roger Carvis
Date: 12/8/2022 9:49:00 AM
Thank you very much... It depicts how rainbow is created... Congratulations too...
Date: 12/6/2022 4:15:00 AM
Roger, my friend, your talent is amazing, and your English is so evocative and flowing!!! please keep the good poesy shining !!!!! good luck in the challenge..
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Roger Carvis
Date: 12/6/2022 10:02:00 AM
Thank you my friend...
Date: 12/5/2022 11:20:00 PM
Beautiful:)
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Roger Carvis
Date: 12/6/2022 3:35:00 AM
Thank you very much...