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Do the colors on your petals fall away with morning dew Does the brightness seem to settle with the light the way it used to? Does the red; the black, and strip of blue blend in with the morning sun Does it start, and end with reminding you of the way our love had once begun The blue, the way my tear had fallen and landed on the blade of grass The pretty, subtle, hint of sky; a pain that seems will never pass The black, the darkness, holds me tight and tries to keep its hold forever It seems I'll never find the light to guide our way to be together The red, the blood, that never dries that drip, drip, drips on me Reminds me of the painful cries when I found out we couldn't be Do the colors on your petals fall away with morning dew Does the brightness seem to settle with the light the way it used to? Does the red; the black, and strip of blue blend in with the morning sun Does it start, and end with reminding you of the way our love had once begun

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Date: 5/9/2013 12:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/8/2013 10:50:00 PM
I was beginning to feel very lonely as the only one who had used rhyme so far, but you are keeping me company. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/8/2013 9:09:00 PM
Dana, congratulations~ LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2013 6:42:00 PM
An excellent rhyme. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/8/2013 2:06:00 PM
what a fantastic way to do the contest mentioning all the colors in this way. I really like yours!! congrats on your deserved win.
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:46:00 PM
DANA, congrats with your featured poem of the week.. Good night~PD
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Date: 12/13/2010 5:40:00 PM
good poem
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Date: 12/5/2010 5:20:00 AM
Well written gem you have penned here...love it...always Michael
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Date: 12/5/2010 12:14:00 AM
Wonderful poem! Can feel the sadness.
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