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Colorful Ideas

The firework finale burst into the sky Like a bunch of brilliant ideas Lighting up the darkness, for those who cannot see Or haven't thought of one yet Sparkling color is spiraling downward Upon everyone who is seeking hope Striking them with patterns of all kinds They walk away from the celebration, Leaving behind the blank sky Every color, every thought is booming One never forgets, creativity ignites Heidi Sands 11/19/22

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Date: 10/19/2022 8:23:00 AM
Seen some magnificent displays in Florida Heidi, they know how to put on a great display. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/19/2022 9:24:00 AM
That sounds great Tom. I love to see the fireworks. I saw my first show in January instead of July, one New Year on a lake in New Hampshire. It was nice. Thank you for your visit and comment. I hope you are having a nice day :)
Date: 10/19/2022 7:00:00 AM
Heidi, your vivid description of shades and the uplifting and encouraging tone of your poem brought a joyful feeling. Blessings
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/19/2022 7:38:00 AM
Hi I am happy to hear it brings about joy. Thank you for your comment on this. Blessings :)
Date: 10/19/2022 6:37:00 AM
Enjoyed this beautiful depiction of color--- and inspiring, uplifting voice of your poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/19/2022 7:37:00 AM
Hi Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed it. It came to me as I was going to bed lol :)

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