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August.29.2023
Colorful or Chimera Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
Placed First

"Where flowers bloom, there is color, beauty and fragance, adding joy to life"~ By Poet
My garden now presents a lovely scene So colorful with flowers unfolding their immaculate petals And greeting me every morning In varied shape and size and in sparkling shades Among them are soothing little white flowers Which open themselves at night in the lunar light, Sensual red roses, multi shaded orchids Flowers of pastel hues, colorful adeniums And jasmines on creeping stems, Intertwined and inseparable Which send out a spray of heady aroma When the gentle breeze sweeps past them There are Bougainvillea’s of red, purple, and orange shades Reflecting the iridescent colors of a setting sun Rightly called paper flowers with their light weight And lack of softness and synthetic appearance These flowers, like torn pieces of crepe paper Fly about with every sweeping wind, Landing down scattered here, there and everywhere Inciting mischief, but causing no harm Pentas of lavender and white shade are seen Nodding at butterflies wishing to be kissed and wooed. Along with flowers grown in pots and soil There are lovely water lilies in my little pond Flowers brighten the indoors and outdoors Lifting our mood and giving us immense joy Oh Lovely maidens, you are one of a special kind You bloom and smile for everyone to enjoy But aren’t you there in my small garden, Staying regal and proud especially for you and me?

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Date: 9/10/2023 11:23:00 PM
Valsa, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the images and quote also, Constance
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Date: 9/6/2023 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/quote/pretty picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great/blessed day.............
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Date: 9/2/2023 9:03:00 PM
My gosh, this is such a HEAVENLY write, scented with ethereal fragrances of blossoming flowers and hued with such an enchanting saga of colours.. Loving everything about this piece.. Your style is so eloquent and I enjoy everytime when I read your gorgeous pieces. This painted a beautiful scene on my heart's canvas and I could actual inhale the perfumed aroma of these blooming angels of the divine.. Such a joy it was, to waltz in your edenic imagery here.. Brilliantly done, adore all the flowers
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Date: 9/2/2023 4:44:00 PM
The photos were a great lead-in to a beautiful poem. The imagery was outstanding and the personal touch at the end was pleasing to read. Your knowledge of flowers is appreciated as the reader finds themselves walking through the garden. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Bill
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Date: 9/1/2023 10:17:00 AM
Valsa, I do believe that they are there "especially for you and me"!! I could not agree more with your beautiful verse in flowers! Your words invite the senses and help me to appreciate my own all the more! Happy Friday xxoo
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Date: 9/1/2023 8:13:00 AM
"There are lovely water lilies in my little pond Flowers brighten the indoors and outdoors Lifting our mood and giving us immense joy" -- I guess, if one looks at another's house (God!~the clutter in mine) one gets insight into a person's spirit. Your lovely garden an extension of your nurturing, blossoming heart and soul. A delightful tour!-- blessings my friend
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Date: 8/31/2023 5:22:00 PM
My friend, you use such colorful and intense imagery in this fine new creation. Such stirs the reader into deeper feeling of the magic you weave. A true gem and dear fav or me. God bless you..
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Date: 8/31/2023 1:52:00 PM
a wonderful and artful language, to enjoy the beauties of this garden, enjoyed all names and details of flowers, such a great moment of reading, thanks
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Date: 8/31/2023 6:02:00 AM
Such an awe inspiring cascade of color, winding its way through your enchanting poem Valsa. Best in show. A lovely poem filled with colorful delights. Well done.
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Date: 8/30/2023 11:23:00 PM
Wow this is such a perfumed poem with vivid colors flowing in a seamless manner. the way you’ve painted imagery and articulated lines in a meticulous manner truly is impressive. And this is one of those poems when days are dark, a reader would read and feel immense joy! How soul warming is this. I especially love the opening and the way you’ve written “ reflecting the iridescent colors of a setting sun” love that so much. Sumptuous diction and eloquent weaving. Thank you for sharing this with all of us
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Date: 8/30/2023 10:04:00 AM
What a lovely poem about flowers! I could see the images of them and their colors. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/29/2023 2:50:00 PM
Flowers add such a special touch to a yard, home, or even just a balcony. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/29/2023 11:23:00 AM
Nice poem, lovely colorful garden. It is my fave. Well done Valsa.
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Date: 8/29/2023 8:02:00 AM
Your garden is beautiful, Valsa as is the poem:)
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Date: 8/29/2023 7:02:00 AM
I must commend you on creating one of the most visually stunning poems I have ever come across. Your writing is a true work of art, with each word carefully selected and skillfully intertwined. Your garden is a true marvel, emanating a delightful fragrance and bursting with vibrant hues. Your talent for bringing beauty to life through words is truly remarkable, Valsa.
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:33:00 AM
I think this is one of my favorites of the colorful poems. Very well done here,Valsa
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Date: 8/29/2023 4:55:00 AM
- Your garden is beautiful ... fragrant and colorful, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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