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The beauty takes my breath away, I know my kind will want to stay On this new world that I have found - It’s somewhere in the Milky Way. The creatures of this wondrous place Are scaly lizards, wild and base. Such monstrous things must be destroyed So we can spawn another race. I take a sample of the turf, Report the planet has such worth, Then leave and freeze the world in ice To kill these dinosaurs on Earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/19/2016 6:59:00 AM
This is apparently your best poem -as far as Poetry Soup is concerned. For the second time I've enjoyed it very much. What wise votes we Poetry Soupites can be.
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:36:00 AM
Good one Jack, & congrats on the win..'
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:57:00 AM
Your cynicism shines through here like a torch in the night, blinding! Loved every word.
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on te fourth place win in the contest, jack
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:01:00 AM
Many Congrats Jack on your super win with this unique and different take on this theme. Best wishes, gautami
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:24:00 AM
Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Jack. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/27/2011 3:37:00 AM
beautiful and did take my breath away. many congrats jack.
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Date: 4/26/2011 6:32:00 PM
My goodness, now here's a noel take on that picture LOL Congrad's on your win oh brave one! Light & Love
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:51:00 PM
Your clever approach paid off, Jack! This has been a fave of mine since I first read it. So happy to see it winning in John's contest. Congratulations, dear friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations Jack on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:22:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your amazing win in John's contest with this perfect poem luv using the new form so well.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your fourth place win Jack (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on 4th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:01:00 AM
Beautiful Jack, Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:51:00 AM
made me SMILE..soup mail ;) Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:27:00 PM
Good one..Enjoyed reading ..Seems like winner's circle to me..Sara
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Date: 4/14/2011 6:54:00 PM
wow, you took it to sci fi mode!! very interesting and very imaginative.
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Date: 4/14/2011 4:57:00 PM
Nice informative and imaginative piece on dino, jack
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Date: 4/14/2011 2:59:00 PM
So THAT's how the dinosaurs died! Some sci-fi movies depict aliens with reptile features, so you had me going for a while, Jack. Will the aliens return to bestow another Ice Age? Wait and see, my friend... This poem goes to my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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