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Colliding

If you were wondering about me, My scars haven’t healed yet Your corrupted fingers penetrating me, Guiding me into a strange situation This place is fairly misleading! I’m turning crazed and disoriented Colliding…Colliding…Oh, colliding If you were wondering about me, My scars haven’t healed yet This place is fairly misleading… I’m bewildered I have this bizarre feeling inside of me I feel as if I’m in space Colliding… colliding… colliding In this bizarre black hole

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/19/2013 12:34:00 AM

Dear David Young POET, Well I have to agree with YOUR Sister this is an Incredible Pen. I Hope to be Colliding with YOUR Talented Pen again soon I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/4/2012 12:48:00 AM

This is incredible and it deserves more views. I absolutely love this poem. I have read it before--I remember you reading it to me. But now that I've read it again. Wow. David, you are an amazing poet. I love you. Always, Laura

J.W. Earnings
Date: 3/23/2013 7:54:00 PM

Aw! Thanks sistah! You're a terrific poet as well! xD Really? I read it to you...? I don't remember .... I have an old disease (somewhat alzteimers?? xD j/k). Thanks and love yah too *hug* Sincerely, D.W.B.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/9/2010 9:53:00 PM

I have a dream that I am floating alot...reminds me of that.

J.W. Earnings
Date: 3/23/2013 7:55:00 PM

Oh sweet! Haha glad I've reminded you about your dreams! xD Have a good weeek.