David William Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Colliding

If you were wondering about me,  
My scars haven’t healed yet 
Your corrupted fingers penetrating me, 
Guiding me into a strange situation   

This place is fairly misleading! 
I’m turning crazed and disoriented 

Colliding…Colliding…Oh, colliding

If you were wondering about me, 
My scars haven’t healed yet 

This place is fairly misleading… I’m bewildered 
I have this bizarre feeling inside of me 
I feel as if I’m in space 

Colliding…				colliding…					colliding
					In this bizarre black hole

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 19, 2013 at 12:34 AM Dear David Young POET, Well I have to agree with YOUR Sister this is an Incredible Pen. I Hope to be Colliding with YOUR Talented Pen again soon I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Laura Breidenthal November 4, 2012 at 12:48 AM This is incredible and it deserves more views. I absolutely love this poem. I have read it before--I remember you reading it to me. But now that I've read it again. Wow. David, you are an amazing poet. I love you. Always, Laura David William Breidenthal March 23, 2013 at 7:54 PM Aw! Thanks sistah! You're a terrific poet as well! xD Really? I read it to you...? I don't remember .... I have an old disease (somewhat alzteimers?? xD j/k). Thanks and love yah too *hug* Sincerely, D.W.B.

Doris Culverhouse July 9, 2010 at 9:53 PM I have a dream that I am floating alot...reminds me of that. David William Breidenthal March 23, 2013 at 7:55 PM Oh sweet! Haha glad I've reminded you about your dreams! xD Have a good weeek.