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Collapsing Thoughts

Somber dreams collapsed ideas Life has become a tragedy No will left in my lungs to breath My heart has been emptied No soul to keep it pumping A melancholy feeling throughout my body Nerve ends snapped like a twig My feet without strength to walk Not even water to create new tears Time has stopped I am in limbo What can I do I am lost without you News I had just learned today They canceled my favorite TV show

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/14/2019 7:23:00 AM
You had me rapt... and then they cancelled. That is art Bobby!!! xomo
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Bobby May
Date: 11/14/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thank You Maureen!!
Date: 11/13/2019 6:31:00 PM
powerful verse Bobby...who do i need to call about getting that tv show back on, we don't need you feeling lost... great penning... hugs :)
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Bobby May
Date: 11/13/2019 6:48:00 PM
Thank you Sandra, Darn TV, lol

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