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A Virtuous Woman She’s seen it all, and regrettably did even more Only a naive man would expect a woman of her age to still be virgin pure. She’s learned her lessons along the way; though she still can’t turn back time, her present choices are better today. A virtuous woman forged from the fire of past heartaches which left her aflame, now, she speaks her mind with the authority of someone who has walked through the pain of mankind's narrow judgments mankind's make believe. Swallowed it whole, wore it on her sleeve, walked out the back door where her true companion offered reprieve. So many years she's been celibate Tell me her sins or drop the stone, God does not leave her lonely still she longs to be loved by a man but she doubts she doubts. Strangely, the longing strengthens her more virtuously ... her fragile soul becoming spiritually whole So she desires and she doubts those things she may never know. 7/11/2017

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Date: 11/15/2017 1:58:00 PM
- A great co-writing, Freddie :) - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 11:06:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to enter the contest Freddie, the poem would have placed higher if there had been a minimum of 2 stanzas each:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2017 7:58:00 PM
"A virtue forged in fire' strengthens her...Great collaboration...
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Date: 7/13/2017 3:26:00 AM
Great collaboration; this is a winner,no doubt.
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:51:00 AM
This is really nice, Freddie. Much softer than you social verse. Nicely done to both of you.
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations to the both of you for an excellent collaboration! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:08:00 AM
Wow, so it was you. I should have realized that because this piece is so beautifully written. Freddie, you and Catie did such a fantastic job with this collaboration. Out of all of them I have read, this one is at the top of my list. Really well done. Bravo to both poets.
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:07:00 AM
Oh wow, that's beautiful! And now I have to start looking for your partner in this wonderful collaboration!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 7/12/2017 10:14:00 AM
Ty, Darren. She was a marvelous poetess to work with. I grew a lot poetically from working w/her. Appreciate the kind words, my friend. Love always.

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