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The Petal-Sprinkled Path
The petal-sprinkled path We walked together The lip-sharing math In the cherry weather We walked together Time flew with lightning speed In the cherry weather Witnessed by the moss and weed Time flew in lightning speed We knitted the tales of lips Witnessed by the moss and weed Through an ocean moved the ships We knitted the tales of lips Amidst of ancient woodland hidden there Through an ocean moved the ships In a quiescence of lulls spell, time wears Amidst of ancient woodland hidden there, Outcropping of pleasure, around, and through In a quiescence of lulls spell, time wears Audience veil, ardent scents, and blush dew Outcropping of pleasure around and through Bring forth a curtain of rare verdant trees Audience veil, ardent scent, and blush dew Peering out heavens trickle summer seas Bring forth a curtain of rare verdant trees The lip-sharing math Peering out heavens trickle summer seas The petal-sprinkled path 7/7/2017 COLLABORATION with Probir Gupta Poetry Contest: COLLABORATION CONTEST Sponsored by: JAN ALLISON

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Date: 11/15/2017 8:43:00 PM
A lovely write Eve.
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Date: 11/15/2017 2:10:00 PM
- A wonderful co-writing, dear Eve - So sad that your partner did not post - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 11:14:00 AM
An absolutely beautiful poem Eve, unfortunately your writing partner didn't enter the contest with their poem so i had to award an HM:-( thanks for taking part in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/15/2017 6:19:00 AM
Lovely collaboration, Eve and Probir, and that too with such a difficult form, well done indeed:)
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Date: 7/11/2017 6:31:00 AM
I like the form you used and how you climbed the steps on the petal sprinkled path ..Beautiful collaboration....
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Date: 7/7/2017 1:33:00 PM
A very dreamy and romantic poem. I also love the form you chose for your collaboration. Well done, Mrs Eve and Probir:) Good luck!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/7/2017 1:40:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel, we both are very pleased with it...

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