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The Petal-Sprinkled Path Collaboration Contest With Probir Gupta

The Petal-Sprinkled Path 


The petal-sprinkled path 
We walked together
The lip-sharing math
In the cherry weather

We walked together
Time flew with lightning speed
In the cherry weather
Witnessed by the moss and weed

Time flew in lightning speed
We knitted the tales of lips
Witnessed by the moss and weed
Through an ocean moved the ships

We knitted the tales of lips 
Amidst of ancient woodland hidden there 
Through an ocean moved the ships
In a quiescence of lulls spell, time wears

Amidst of ancient woodland hidden there, 
Outcropping of pleasure, around, and through
In a quiescence of lulls spell, time wears
Audience veil, ardent scents, and blush dew

Outcropping of pleasure around and through
Bring forth a curtain of rare verdant trees
Audience veil, ardent scent, and blush dew
Peering out heavens trickle summer seas

Bring forth a curtain of rare verdant trees
The lip-sharing math
Peering out heavens trickle summer seas
The petal-sprinkled path

7/7/2017

 
COLLABORATION  with Probir Gupta
Poetry Contest: COLLABORATION CONTEST 
Sponsored by: JAN ALLISON

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James Inman Date: 11/15/2017 8:43:00 PM A lovely write Eve. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/15/2017 2:10:00 PM - A wonderful co-writing, dear Eve - So sad that your partner did not post - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/15/2017 11:14:00 AM An absolutely beautiful poem Eve, unfortunately your writing partner didn't enter the contest with their poem so i had to award an HM:-( thanks for taking part in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/15/2017 6:19:00 AM Lovely collaboration, Eve and Probir, and that too with such a difficult form, well done indeed:) Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 7/11/2017 6:31:00 AM I like the form you used and how you climbed the steps on the petal sprinkled path ..Beautiful collaboration.... Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 7/7/2017 1:33:00 PM A very dreamy and romantic poem. I also love the form you chose for your collaboration. Well done, Mrs Eve and Probir:) Good luck! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 7/7/2017 1:40:00 PM Thank you, Daniel, we both are very pleased with it...