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No Looking Back Morning light breaks through my trance...as your loving words float off into the wind...like a kaleidosope of butterflies, flashing before my eyes. Too many forgotten words... long after the euphoria of your first caress. Your eager fingers playing smoothly along my nerve ends...like a magical moonlight sonata lain out on an ethereal keyboard. Droplets of musky perspiration trailing down your chest... lips, those precious lips, following into the glistening valley of desire...as a blue haze of passion is thrown to never ending heights. Side by side two lost souls passing in the night...grasping seeking solace one more time, holding each other tight. Silent as a whisper... I slipped away not looking back at your slumbering form I knew I could not stay in the safety of your arms I could not endanger your life again. 4 July 2017

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Joseph May

Date: 11/16/2017 8:54:00 AM

Great write..Congrats to both of you on a fine win

James Inman

Date: 11/15/2017 8:05:00 PM

Tim, a passionate write about two souls who are wonderful lovers but not so good at loving.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2017 1:52:00 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/15/2017 11:38:00 AM

Phwarr Tim A very sensual collaboration and I see from the comments that Seren was your partner:-) many congrats to you both:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/9/2017 9:21:00 AM

Oh....WOW!!! Simply WOW! Makes me want to write a steamy one too. Good luck in the contest. Reads like a winner to me.

White Wolf

Date: 7/7/2017 6:27:00 AM

Wowza, Tim! This is awesome, my friend! Best of luck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2017 11:35:00 PM

wow, STEAMY write. I love this. Who was your partner??

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2017 12:51:00 PM

sultry team-up delighting my senses, tim... huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2017 12:10:00 PM

- A warm and romantic wind ... with kisses of butterfly wings .... beautiful - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/6/2017 10:03:00 AM

Extremely passionate write, Tim and Seren. That was some one night stand:) Good luck!

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/6/2017 9:53:00 AM

Sexy... Truly beautiful! I enjoyed reading it :)

Lin Lane

Date: 7/6/2017 8:28:00 AM

I could not write anything to express my feelings more than what I wrote on Seren's post, so forgive me for c/p it to.... The end is driving me insane... go back! The danger lies in NOT having such love. Seriously, you two wrote a beautiful, if somewhat sorrowful night of passion that fits perfectly with the sonata.

Darren White

Date: 7/6/2017 8:03:00 AM

Wonderful, commented on the counterpart's poem list too! Good luck you two :)

Sara Ella

Date: 7/5/2017 9:50:00 PM

This is a beautiful collaboration Tim and Seren <3 Good luck! :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/5/2017 8:59:00 PM

Beautiful collaboration Tim and Seren...love the musical touch...GL in the contest...

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/5/2017 7:53:00 PM

Great passion, congratulations to you both...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/5/2017 3:39:00 PM

Very beautiful you two, I really enjoyed this poem!

Chris Green

Date: 7/5/2017 3:38:00 PM

A very well written deep and intriguing piece. The emotions in this are felt and the style is so cool. I like everything about this. Bravo to both poets.