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Cold Genesis

My chill flurries in the wind— with it, wild flower Seeds to woo Winter.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/24/2023 8:26:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Paige! Visuals that carry the depth of your words! Wonderfully crafted! Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving. Blessings!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/18/2023 7:32:00 PM

Yes, those seeds do woo winter, as they become ready to bloom within the splendor of Spring. This is beautiful in every way, my dear friend. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/18/2023 3:10:00 PM

loved the title as well as the imagery in your poem. Winter is a time of genesis, something I sometimes forget. Your poem reminded me of that reality. Have an enjoyable weekend, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2023 1:36:00 PM

such an interesting image. Very pretty

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/18/2023 1:23:00 PM

just gorgeous - what a talented writer you are!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 7:40:00 AM

Ah i am loving the alliterations in this and the way you’ve used such descriptive and unique wordplay is so impressive: absolutely love especially “ flurries in” “ wildflower seeds to woo winter “ beautifully delivered. Pleasure reading