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Cold Embrace - Waltz Wave

COLD EMBRACE Cold embrace long stolen from my arms. Tempted love too weak, succumbing without remorse, betrayal without cause. Lusting’s rendezvous seeking heat without fire. 6/10/2015 for Kim Merryman - Waltz Wave Poetry Contest

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/18/2015 6:41:00 PM

congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2015 1:57:00 PM

a dark waltz indeed many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/18/2015 12:59:00 PM

sweet John, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/18/2015 11:49:00 AM

Dark and a delight to read, your uniqueness stands out in the crowd :-)

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 6/17/2015 11:47:00 PM

Like the parker element of desire in the waltz. Congratulations on your win. Jan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 11:14:00 PM

Yours is a darker look at the waltz of the heart! Congrats for the fine win, John.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/17/2015 6:09:00 PM

John, congrats on placing 3rd in my contest! You said so much in so few words. Great write, though sad. Well done! Love, Kim

Constance La France

Date: 6/16/2015 12:01:00 PM

John, I am still floating on your wave, 7,and thanks for visiting my poem, Beware

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2015 9:36:00 AM

I was swept away by this one.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2015 9:36:00 AM

When you have a chance check out our group poem, it is now finished.