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Coconut Sandy Sachet

Summer crisp visions entertain thoughts Carefree clatter echoes on air Whitecaps roll in hypnotic cadence A seaside chorus to sooth the weary A breeze of reflection arrives on time Delivering a coconut sandy sachet Senses brimming in winsome indulgence Popsicle cherries bid icy forgiveness Banners that fly compete with white gulls To capture debate in glimpses of blue Summer crisp visions entertain thoughts Straw-hat memories, a fated encore 6/20/18

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/23/2018 9:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Great imagery and poem. :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/24/2018 8:39:00 AM

Thanks so much, Susan xxoo

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/21/2018 5:44:00 PM

I love coconut summers and straw hats. You used all the magic words. Well wrapped together. Congrats on your winning poem, Mike

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/21/2018 5:58:00 PM

Thanks so much Pixie!!!!

Roy Pett

Date: 6/21/2018 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Mike, so well written. :))

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/21/2018 5:57:00 PM

Thank you Roy!!

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/21/2018 7:20:00 AM

It's like I'm at the beach! Good write. Congrats.

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/21/2018 7:33:00 AM

Thanks so much, Dale!!

Warren Doll

Date: 6/21/2018 7:15:00 AM

Wonderful! Congrats on your number 1 win. //Warren :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/21/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thanks so much, Warren!!

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/21/2018 7:09:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Mike. Well done.

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/21/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Line xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/21/2018 2:20:00 AM

Lovely verse Mike. Congratulations Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/21/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thanks Tom !!!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/20/2018 7:00:00 PM

this smells magnificent :) Hugs Eve ~ ‘ *

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/20/2018 7:29:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2018 6:32:00 PM

this is loaded with such interesting and colorful imagery. Very nice!

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/20/2018 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea xxoo

Silent One

Date: 6/20/2018 2:03:00 PM

You have really developed into an great poet Mike.. I have been happy to witness your journey... Your poetry gets better and better.. always been deep... I find it gives a little insight into you..

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/20/2018 2:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for that wonderful compliment Silent One, if I have learned anything, it is from the likes of you and the other talented folks who have been gracious enough to comment and offer encouragement. I do really appreciate it and am having much fun !!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/20/2018 10:59:00 AM

Very nice Mike! Great usage of words with this. I enjoyed it :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/20/2018 12:12:00 PM

thanks Heidi xxoo