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Cobblestone

Cobblestone The harlot traipses cobblestone Jack the ripper senses she's alone. June15,2025 For Nette Onclauds Create a Crystalline contest

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/17/2025 4:15:00 PM

eek this creeped me out John - so few words paint a vivid picture! hugs jan xx

John Hamilton
Date: 6/17/2025 5:40:00 PM

Yeah I know right, not my usual but I thought Nette wanted a twist at the end, I guess this was too much for her lol. Nice to have you pass by today take care Jan.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2025 11:26:00 AM

ohhhh, love that!

John Hamilton
Date: 6/17/2025 3:33:00 PM

Yeah thanks Andrea wonder why Nette didn't place it, I thought it was pretty clever, guess not her style. I appreciate your kind words and visit.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/15/2025 7:18:00 PM

Ohhhh, good one! Dear John, your poem is ingenious! The vivid imagery, in so few words, is full of action and an impending sense of doom.. poor lass! It's great to see you back, my poet friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Hamilton
Date: 6/15/2025 8:05:00 PM

Thanks Susan for your two visits today I am so happy you liked this.

Tom Woody

Date: 6/15/2025 11:16:00 AM

In the words of the immortal Freddie Mercury: "Another one bites the dust. Another one bites the dust. And another one's gone and another one's gone and another one bites the dust!" Good one Johnny. My latest is right up our alley

Tom Woody
Date: 6/15/2025 11:30:00 AM

Yes, try to be as eclectic as possible

John Hamilton
Date: 6/15/2025 11:27:00 AM

Thanks Tom it's my first try at a crystalline form, it came to me quickly with the prompt. Not my usual style but trying different things. Thanks for the visit will check out your latest.