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Coal Crackers

I remember waking to the smell of coffee Miner’s going off to work Hear that colliery whistle blowing Lunch cans in hand Look of determination on faces A sense of purpose, a sense of pride A dignity in a hard day’s work Coal Crackers Local bars thrived for the hard working hard drinking miner Church on Sunday, back to Hell on Monday No complaints, feeding their families Sirens going off, waiting for word, praying Two injured, no fatalities, lucky day Visit the injured, covered dish, thanking God A different breed, God fearing, hard working Coal Crackers Walking little brother by the coal banks Wind blowing, coal dust, blackened faces Laughing, mom’s going to be mad Bathtub ring, Dad’s coming home Supper’s on the table, say grace Rough day, Sun still shines so we’re okay Coal Crackers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/10/2008 12:08:00 PM
I think you have done them justice with this one. I admire that you have chosen to write about people, the true treasures of life. Touching poem! Anne-Marie Christine
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Date: 8/9/2008 2:48:00 PM
Great tribute Vince, it is not a easy way to make a living. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/9/2008 4:30:00 AM
This is definitely one of your best, Vince....simple, direct, strong! Love, Daver
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Date: 8/7/2008 10:01:00 PM
Hard working people and it is nice to see a tribute for the coal miners. Good Job. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 8/7/2008 1:29:00 PM
Great tribute to hard working coal miners. Love this whole write, including the childhood memory with the ring around the tub. Guess mom was mad, but all was so well, as the sun still shined on a rough day. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/7/2008 12:12:00 PM
Perfect discription of these brave, hearty miners - keeping this great country alive with their debts. Well said, beautiful! Kristin
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Date: 8/7/2008 10:43:00 AM
the miners don't get there due. in your writing about them they are in a way. a great write, a great poem.
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Date: 8/7/2008 8:46:00 AM
Hi Vince - Great tribute to those who do a harrowing job - The simplicity of life is pointed out very well in this poem - Just as long as the sun still shines at the end of the - Amazing poem Vince - Thank you for your comments and support - God Bless you and your family
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Date: 8/7/2008 8:27:00 AM
Wow...this poem says it all. You could write a whole book about the hard life of a miner, but you said it all in this moving piece of poetry. The rest of us think our lives are difficult.....however, most of us have no idea. You blew me away with this one....... You are a gifted writer. Very sincerely, Carrie
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