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Clutter

clean out the closet and unhook your woes from all hangers. all are much too soiled to be worn by your disillusioned heart. sweep up the debris and clear out the heaping pile of suppressed pain and untrustworthiness taking up all the space in your broken heart to create enough room to let people in once again, for love's light to shine through. Second Chance For Your N-A Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand Date written: 06/19/2022

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Date: 1/3/2023 10:13:00 AM
Wonderful metaphoric write Edward! So creative and engaging. Congratulations on your win! Think I will go clean out a closet! Blessings for your new year my friend!
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Date: 12/21/2022 2:52:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Creative use of metaphors. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/21/2022 5:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Date: 7/1/2022 11:34:00 AM
Oh my! I tell myself to get rid of the clutter every few months. It collects so fast! Well penned Edward. Linda
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/1/2022 3:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Linda:-)
Date: 6/20/2022 5:45:00 PM
Well said! Enjoyed!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/25/2022 2:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)
Date: 6/20/2022 7:13:00 AM
Excellent Edward. Your wise words can reach many :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/25/2022 2:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)
Date: 6/20/2022 5:01:00 AM
Superbly done in splendid metaphors. A message well delivered.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/25/2022 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)
Date: 6/19/2022 3:32:00 PM
Beautifully written. I agree, Edward, we court clutter - both physical + emotional. Be well. Brian
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/19/2022 6:07:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Brian:-)

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