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A Bold Mixed Bouquet of Pink and Yellow Flowers Pink Wedding Bouquets

As clusters of blooms rustle to sashay, Peonies, roses, and lilies delight With hints of peach, of gold in fine array! Their rich fragrance wafts on a summer day Adorning the lane with dewed petals bright; As clusters of blooms rustle to sashay. How these florets dance beneath morning’s ray Like embroidered sheaths that waltz through the night, With tints of peach, of gold in fine array! I cuddle each one gently while bird-songs play Of starlit tunes on a heavenly flight, As clusters of blooms rustle to sashay. O peonies, lilies, roses so gay This heart chooses you in a most blest rite; With tints of peach, of gold in fine array! Such joy you give, now my wedding bouquet Through one lustrous moment, vows I recite As clusters of blooms rustle to sashay; With tints of peach, of gold in fine array! ........................ 6/20/2016 Broken Wings' Villanelle Me a Flower or Flowers Syl count checked at howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 7/1/2016 6:44:00 PM
Beautifully written!
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Date: 7/1/2016 11:55:00 AM
A wonderful write Nette, great flow.
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Date: 7/1/2016 9:42:00 AM
I see I was right, it was done well. Congrats Nette, hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/1/2016 1:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette. It's a beautiful poem so visuallly and olfactorily appealing, combined with the joy of the wedding encapsulated in the colourful bouquet. ~karam~ (Oh, A 7, too)
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Date: 6/30/2016 8:17:00 PM
Nette, so beautifully penned lady! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 6/26/2016 12:27:00 PM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 6/21/2016 3:25:00 PM
A 7 for this moving, skillfully-written villanelle, Nette. Janice
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Date: 6/21/2016 7:43:00 AM
I think you have done this so well Nette! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/20/2016 8:31:00 PM
Nette, this is beautiful, great flow, great rhyme, and I love the line like embroidered sheaths... and I cuddle each... a 7 and good luck in the contest :) Thank you so very much for reading my poem “Pleasure You To Walk The Night.” Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/20/2016 2:58:00 PM
Lovely words for a lovely thing and event! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/20/2016 11:45:00 AM
This is a bridal delight--your floral words bloom!
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Date: 6/20/2016 10:44:00 AM
What an exotic bouquet of poetry dear, nette! As a gardener first and as a poet I adore It! Hugs and a seven!
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Date: 6/20/2016 9:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 6/20/2016 8:11:00 AM
- A beautiful bouquet, Nette - Peonies and roses are my favorites :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/20/2016 6:22:00 AM
Very nicely done and well written.
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