Clubmayhem

Lost myself in this crowd I’m trying to find you I’m feeling my way My vision is gone So many hands Touching my body But yours are the only- -ones that I want I’m really a good girl But your making me bad I think I’ve took acid I’m tripping like mad I’m out of space where no one can find me Your gripping my waist So where am I now I need you to calm me down I need to find my way out now The music has got me got me going I need to get myself out

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2019 11:09:00 PM

This one is sad, for all the write reasons, as you have pointed out so many wrong ones. I am sorry as I read it, but glad you have survived.

Rosie Hill
Date: 1/12/2019 7:01:00 AM

Poetry sheds light on darker situations that people need to know about. Until I’ve started writing and unveiling an experience, I realise how strong of a person I am and how many things can happen to one person, yet we all carry on until life is not a good enough reason to live. To be able to pour my heart out and have no judgement, just people to support and care and understand the events that take place - it’s a beautiful thing and I’m forever grateful for the chance to do this x

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/11/2019 1:59:00 AM

Drugs are the scourge of society,a hit for a short time hooked for life. Ruins many lives. Tom.

Rosie Hill
Date: 1/11/2019 5:13:00 AM

I agree. Sadly, in this world some malicious people spike people’s drinks with drugs, for whatever reason. It’s so dangerous and I agree- ruin people’s lives