Rosie Hill Poet Free verse

Clubmayhem

Lost myself in this crowd
I’m trying to find you 
I’m feeling my way 
My vision is gone

So many hands 
Touching my body
But yours are the only-
-ones that I want 

I’m really a good girl
But your making me bad
I think I’ve took acid
I’m tripping like mad
I’m out of space where no one can find me
Your gripping my waist
So where am I now
I need you to calm me down
I need to find my way out now
The music has got me got me going
I need to get myself out

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Caren Krutsinger January 11, 2019 at 11:09 PM This one is sad, for all the write reasons, as you have pointed out so many wrong ones. I am sorry as I read it, but glad you have survived. Rosie Hill January 12, 2019 at 7:01 AM Poetry sheds light on darker situations that people need to know about. Until I’ve started writing and unveiling an experience, I realise how strong of a person I am and how many things can happen to one person, yet we all carry on until life is not a good enough reason to live. To be able to pour my heart out and have no judgement, just people to support and care and understand the events that take place - it’s a beautiful thing and I’m forever grateful for the chance to do this x

Tom Cunningham January 11, 2019 at 1:59 AM Drugs are the scourge of society,a hit for a short time hooked for life. Ruins many lives. Tom. Rosie Hill January 11, 2019 at 5:13 AM I agree. Sadly, in this world some malicious people spike people’s drinks with drugs, for whatever reason. It’s so dangerous and I agree- ruin people’s lives